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A Look Across the Majlis

Characters:

  • Mohammed – A humble falconer from Al Ain, raised on values of honour and patience.
  • Aisha – A quiet, observant girl from Abu Dhabi, raised in a house of scholars.
  • Fatima – Aisha’s cousin and closest friend.
  • Salem – Mohammed’s brother, fiery and proud.

Part I: A Glance That Changed the Air

It was during a wedding majlis in Al Ain, men in one tent, women in another, voices mingling over oud smoke and gahwa. But in that short, fleeting moment when the families crossed paths in the courtyard, Mohammed saw her.

She wasn’t unveiled, of course. But her eyes met his, just once — just enough for the world to shift.

“Wallah,” he told Salem that night, “I saw in her eyes the silence of prayer and the storm of the desert.”

He asked around gently, discreetly. Found her name. Aisha. Her family? Respectable, learned. Reserved.

Weeks passed, and he saw her only from afar — at Eid gatherings, at funerals, always behind the veil, always among women.

But his heart grew louder than his voice.


Part II: His Silent Proposal

He never dared write a letter — it would dishonour them both.

Instead, he wrote Qasida poetry and recited it to the falcons under moonlight, as if the winds might carry the verses to her courtyard.

“O you whose silence speaks of oceans,
Let my longing be hidden behind the dunes,
But if Allah wills, let me once hear your salaam.”

When his family approached hers, they were met with a gentle refusal.

Aisha’s father had already promised her to a distant cousin, from a prominent family in Dubai.


Part III: The Storm Between Brothers

Mohammed didn’t argue. He accepted Allah’s decree with dignity. But Salem—his hot-headed brother—confronted Aisha’s cousin at a gathering, words flew, nearly fists.

Aisha’s father was angered by the rumour of Mohammed’s feelings. He saw it as disrespect.

Aisha, hearing of all this, felt torn between love she couldn’t speak of and duty she couldn’t betray.

She whispered to Fatima one evening:
“He never spoke to me, never sent a word… but still, he is the only one I hear.”


Part IV: Dying for One Look

Mohammed grew thin. He kept his prayers, his chores, his respect—but he stopped smiling.

The falcons he trained sensed it. His poetry stopped.

He only asked Salem once:

“Did you see her at Eid? Was she well?”

Salem nodded.

Mohammed replied softly,

“Alhamdulillah… I would give my breath for one salaam from her lips. That would be enough.”


Part V: The Illness

Weeks before Aisha’s wedding, she fell ill. Not gravely, but enough that the wedding was postponed.

Her father, watching her wither, finally asked:

“Do you want this marriage?”

She paused. Lowered her gaze. Then whispered:

“No.”


Part VI: The Turn of Fate

In the old tradition of istikhara (prayer for guidance), her father sought a dream.

That very night, he dreamed of Aisha standing in a garden with a falcon resting peacefully beside her. The next morning, he summoned Mohammed’s father.


Part VII: The Salaam He Waited For

It was simple. A modest nikah, attended by family. No dancing, no gold—just peace.

As Aisha entered the women’s side, she walked past the partition where Mohammed sat. From behind the curtain, in a voice only he could hear, she said:

“As-salamu ‘alaykum… ya Mohammed.”

He wept silently into his palms.


Final Scene: Years Later

They lived humbly, raising two daughters and a son. Mohammed never stopped writing poetry—but now, it was no longer full of longing. It was full of gratitude.

“In a single salaam,
Allah gave me what kings cannot buy.
The one I prayed for… became the one I pray with.”


❤️‍🔥 This is love in the old Emirates… Not loud. Not rushed. But real, dignified, and destined.

Certainly. Here’s a respectful and culturally sensitive closing statement you can add to the end of your post or story:


🤍 Cultural Respect Note

This story is a humble piece of fiction inspired by the beauty, values, and traditions of the Emirates. Every effort has been made to honour Emirati culture with dignity and love.

If, by any chance, any part of this story is found to unintentionally misrepresent or offend any cultural, social, or religious values, we sincerely welcome your guidance and will respectfully make corrections or remove it upon request.

With deep respect and admiration for the heritage of the UAE.
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